We have been writing stories about diving under the sea. Have a read. We are very proud of the interesting words we are starting to put into our stories.
I am a diver. I leaned back and went under the water. When I went under I was amazed!. There were fish. They were pink and black. It was beautiful. I am a diver. My best thing was an octopus. It was orangy/brown. It was beautiful. It was in the coral. I was putting my clothes on to go in the ocean. I was happy. Paris.
I am a diver and I saw a school shark. It was a big school shark and I was excited. He did not bite me. He is grey and he was enormous. Desmond.
I am a diver. I landed on my back then I swam under the water. Pafelio
I am diving under the water on a boat and I jump down backwards into the water. I saw a stingray doing a front flip in the ocean. He was black and had a long tail and had white on his front. It was scary under the water in case he will sting me. I saw a big shark swimming fast. Faatoealu
I am a diver. I hop into the water. I splash then I swam to look at the fish. The fish look black and white. That fish was cool. I see a big shark. The shark has big teeth and big eyes. I was scared. I saw a stingray. I was happy. Ala
The diver swims deep in the water and he looks at the fish. The fish was colourful. Troy
I am a diver. I went under the water. I saw under the water a zebrafish. It is a zebra fish because it is balck and white. Katrulena
I am a good diver. I see lots of fish. I see a colouful fish. He is outside and black and white and I see a sea anemone and I see a stingray. I saw heaps of fish and I saw a zebra fish. They were in the ocean. I saw all sorts of fish. They were swimming together. I saw heaps of sharks. I saw a school shark. I saw one shark on the ground. I saw a big shark in the sea and I saw some orange corals when I was blowing bubbles. Seila
I am a diver under the water. I saw a fish. It was a red and white fish. It looked like Nemo and I saw a stingray. It did a flip and I saw a red and blue fish and I saw a shark and I was scared because it was scary. I saw its gills. Pariz
The diver was on a boat and they fell off the boat and there was a stingray. Then he saw a fish and the diver was swimming in the water and he found a stingray. It was fun. Tyreese
I am a diver and I went down in the sea. I saw the fish, it was orange swimming in the green coral. Margaret.
I am a diver. I fall back into the water. I see a sea anemone that looks like flowers and I saw a zebra fish. It had stripes and was black and white. The zebra fish was looking at the grass and I saw the diver with the camera. Dreshaun.
I am a diver on a boat. I am doing a back flip. I made a splash into the water. I saw a clown fish like Nemo. I saw a sea snake. It had black and white stripes. He was swishing through the rocks slowly and I was blowing bubbles. Keanu.
This writing is wonderful Room Two. It has made me think about whet I might see being a diver. Well done and keep up the brilliant work - I love it!
ReplyDeleteWow Room 2!!! You have written amazing stories! I love the way that you have described what you saw in detail. - Miss Morfey
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