We have been learning about writing descriptions of characters.

We have been learning about writing descriptions of characters.  Here are some of our first examples of our writing.

The girl looks at the show.  She looks like she's scared.  She's staring at the show.  Dreshaun.

My Mum works at the airport and we help her clean then we play at her work.  Katrulena

My Mum works at Chiswick.  She cooks the meals.  After work she picks me up and she takes me home and I go on my computer and I play games and I watch movies.  Hayden.

My Mum looks after me and my baby brother and my Mum makes the meals.  Keanu

My Mum is cooking some bread.  Mum is a good cook.  She bought my bike because she is nice.  Faatoelau

The boy was jumping up and down on the trampoline.  He has red hair and he is happy because he likes jumping up and down..  Seila

The boy went on the trampoline.  He looks happy.  He has red hair sticking up.  Troy

My Mum is nice to me when I am crying.  She likes woodworking and she is good at it.  Max

The boy is jumping on the trampoline.  He looks happy because he is having fun.  Tyreese

Th girl has a blue skirt and a red top.  She's about 6 years old and she has black sticky up eyelashes.  Troy

The boy is jumping on the trampoline.  The hair is red. The t-shirt is green.  Pariz

The girl looks like she has make up on.  She is about 6 to 11 years old.  She has a red top.  She is blonde.  She has pig tails.  She is a school girl. Margaret.